Monday 14 March 2011

Feedback from our class

Group 64
  • Good use and range of camera shots and angles
  • Music was really good and fit in with what was on screen - until it stopped
  • Titles were well placed and looked good.
  • Narrative was good.
Group 66
  • Good use of camera work and editing
  • Soundtrack was well suited for the genre
  • Shot were well framed
  • Opening credits were well positioned in the frames of the shots
  • Very good shots of the book pages etc
  • Soundtrack just needs finishing
  • Storyline wasn't yet clear
Group 61


Clear understanding of the protagonist, as it is easy to spot she or potentially somebody like her will be victimised at some point throughout the film
good use of music at the beinning, ut should fade out instead of suddenly stopping.
Plot a bit unclear but camera shots make it eerie like a thriller.
Good flickering effect when the shot is of the man in the window.
Effective use of lighting and camera angle when showing the man peering through the window. Use of shot makes him look powerful, whilst the dark lighting gives a vague look leaving his identity a mystery.


Group 62


There is lots of good shot types, the music really creates atmosphere and suspense, and good use of thunder claps throughout to back up production name. Mise-en-scene was thought about well, good location, and costume. Good use of transitions, allowed the sequence to flow. Created innocence for protagonist character and leaves the viewer with questions of who is the figure in the window. Good use of credits, made it look proffessional, could of had more detail- produced by, directed by ETC. Good use of natural lighting whilst outside- rainy day so fitted the genre. inside where the antagonist was standing, the lighting was limited- one candle- this created a contrast between the two characters.
keep up good music standard.
Beth and Lauren


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